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 Serah Riley's first away mission proved extraordinarily traumatic.  Agents of
-the Orion Syndicate abducted her on Telani VII.  While being held, she acted courageously to save a fellow captive from being raped.  Serah deliberately
+the Orion Syndicate abducted her on Telani VII.  While confined, she acted
-risked being assaulted herself by luring her guards into her cell where she
+courageously to save a fellow captive from being gang raped.  She deliberately
-was able to subdue them with neurotoxin laced harpins.  She then used the
+risked being assaulted herself to lure her guards into her cell where she was able to subdue them with neurotoxin laced harpins.  She then used the guards' weapons to stun over a dozen Orions.
-guards' weapons to stun over a dozen Orions.
 Shortly after delivering her charge to safety, Serah was kidnapped again by a