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 with comparatively limited scientific research capability as
 evidenced in a reduced number of laboratories.  This is not a
-problem as the VALHALLA-class is a ship designed for Fleet coordination and
+problem as the VALHALLA-class is a ship designed for Fleet coordination
-combat roles. It also contains an aft launch bay for 12 combat shuttles
+and combat roles. It also contains an aft launch bay for 12 combat
-adding to its strategic and tactical multi-role purpose.
+shuttles adding to its strategic and tactical multi-role purpose.
 The VALHALLA-class holds 400 Marines and a number of support
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 The first ship of this class, the USS VALHALLA, NCC 18000 was launched in
 under the command of Captain Cameron Carver. Her sister ship, the
 USS VALKYRIE, NCC 18001 was launched early the next year. So far
 only two starships of this class have been commissioned.
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 ===='''''Naming:'''''====
 VALHALLA-class command battlecruisers are named for Norse mythical
-gods, heroes, events/places, and creatures. The VALHALLA's sister ship
+gods, heroes, events/places, and creatures.
-is the USS VALKYRIE, NCC 18001. The next four vessels scheduled
-for commissioning are the USS BEOWULF, NCC 18002; the USS TYR,
+The VALHALLA's sister ships are the USS VALKYRIE, NCC 18001 and
-NCC 18003; the USS ODIN, NCC 18004 and the USS RAGNAROK, NCC 18006.
+the USS ODEN, NCC 18002.
+The next four vessels scheduled for commissioning are the USS RAGNAROK,
+NCC 18003; the USS TYR, NCC 18004 in 2423; the USS HEIMDALL, NCC 18006;
+the USS SIF, NCC 18007 in 2424.
 The USS THOR, NCC 18005 was scheduled to be commissioned shortly
-after the VALKYRIE, but a design flaw was discovered and construction
+after the ODEN, but a design flaw was discovered and construction
-was halted.
+was halted. It has been scheduled for completion in 2424.
-Heroes and Gods: BEOWULF, TYR, FAFNIR, HELA, HEIMDALL, LOKI, ODIN,
+Heroes and Gods: BEOWULF, TYR, FAFNIR, HELA, HEIMDALL, LOKI, ODEN,
 RAGNAR, SIF, SIGMUND, SIGURD, SURTUR, THOR.
 Places and Mythical Beasts:  VALHALLA, VALKYRIE, ALFHEIM, BIFROST,
-FENRIS, HEL, HUGIN, MIDGARD, MUNIN, NIFLHEIM, RAGNAROK, SLEIPNIR,
+FENRIS, HUGIN, MIDGARD, MUNIN, NIFLHEIM, RAGNAROK, SLEIPNIR,
 YGGDRASIL.