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Any suggestions either of you have would be most welcome. :) | Any suggestions either of you have would be most welcome. :) | ||
== Update SD 2262.008 == | |||
I did a few things to bring her more in line with what the ORIGINS folks have been discussing: | |||
1. I changed the background notes so that it reads more along what we had been discussing behind-the-scenes: that since Nero the "Hawks vs. Doves" internal power struggle had seen the Hawks gaining steam, and part of that evidence is MIRANDA herself. So I didn't make many notes about lab space and the like, instead focusing on its military capabilities. | |||
2. I fixed the firing arcs on the phaser cannons so they actually make sense. Thought: We may want to think about limiting their firing so that you can't fire both fore and aft at the same time- perhaps they're linked through a single heavy capacitor that only allows the two forward or two aft cannons on the weapons bar to fire at one time. | |||
3. I changed the deck plans to reflect a ship witrh far fewer decks. Jeff, you may want to look this over some... | |||
Still leaving the crew complement to you, Jeff. :) |