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-===LT Wraith Storm- Chief Engineer, USS ''Republic''===
+[[Category:Bureau of Information]][[Category:Task Forces/Unit Portals]][[Category:STAR FLEET: ORIGINS]][[Category:ORIGINS: USS Constellation]]
+{{ORIGINS_header}}
+===LT Wraith Storm- Chief Engineer, USS ''Constellation''===
 [[Image:AT-O-3-eng-sec.png|Lieutenant (O-3)]]
 * Player: [[Bull_Matt|Bull, Matt]]
 * Contact: [mailto:Officer.wolfe@googlemail.com Email]
-* Last Updated: SD 2261.217
+* Last Updated: SD 2261.363
-* [[ORIGINS:_Player_Roster#USS_Republic_NCC-1371|Return to Roster]]
+* [[ORIGINS:_Twelfth_Fleet_Roster#USS_Constellation_NCC-1017|Return to Roster]]
+-----
 <PRE>
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 I. Personal Data
 ================
 Full Name: 	Wraith
 Surname: 	Storm
 Nickname: 	The Spark of Sirius, The Sirius survivor.
 Current Rank: 	Lieutenant (O-3)
-Current Billet: Chief Engineering Officer, USS REPUBLIC NCC 1371
+Current Billet: Chief Engineering Officer, USS CONSTELLATION NCC-1017
 Species: 	Homo Sapiens Sapiens
 Gender/Sex:	Male
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 Spouse: 	Long term relationship with Vivien Goodyer
 Children:	None
 A. Physical Description
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 II.  Educational Background
 ===========================
 A. Academic Institutions Attended
 ---------------------------------
 Recieved private tutoring on board the USS L'ORIENT by the various
 department heads and Captain Goodyer.
 B. Service Schools Attended
 ---------------------------
    -- Star Fleet Engineering Corps Officers School
 C. Qualifications (MOS/MOCs)
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    -- MOS:  Shuttle pilot
    -- MOS:  Hand to hand combat techniques
 D. Star Fleet Academy Record
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 Athletics:  	N/A
 Activities: 	Engineering clubs anything mechanical.
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 A. Chronology (tabular form)
 ----------------------------
 -14 	Grew up in the failed Lupin colony, Sirius system.
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 and this later led to a full blown romance. Wraith stayed at the
 Goodyers for four months before deciding to join Starfleet officially
-and going to the academy in San Francisco. He was blessed by having
+and going to the Academy in San Francisco. He was blessed by having
-the senior staff of the L'ORIENT vouch for him to the academy
+the senior staff of the L'ORIENT vouch for him to the Academy
-hierarchy as he had no recognized qualifications.  He was duely
+hierarchy as he had no recognized qualifications.  He was accepted.
-accepted.
 AT THE ACADEMY
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 superior officer namely the XO.
-The incident arose when the first officer came storming into
+The incident arose when a drunken first officer came storming into
 engineering demanding more power from the warp core to the nacelles.
-It was Wraiths shift and he was in charge and he politely told the XO
+It was Wraith's shift and he was in charge and he politely told the XO
 that the CHEROKEES engine were running at peak efficiency, having been
 calibrated by Wraith himself. Not satisfied the XO started to
 re-calibrate the engines right then, Wraith watched emotionless as
 Klaxons started to sound off, a core breach was imminent. Somehow
-through the XO's meddling with Wraiths perfect calibration and
+through the XO's meddling with Wraith's perfect calibration and
-balancing of the engines he'd had brought the system into meltdown.
+balancing of the engines, he had brought the system into meltdown.
 Stepping forward and pushing the XO out of the way of the console,
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 On returning to Earth, Wraith was hauled up for court martial. Deemed
-to of acted with extra ordinary calmness in solving the core breech he
+to have acted with extra ordinary calmness in solving the core breech he
 was also said to be reckless in his dealing with XO. He was busted
-back down to Ensign and served 6 months in a Starfleet prison on the
+back down to Ensign and served 6 days in a Starfleet prison on the
-moon. Luna 2.
+moon, Luna 2.
 On release from prison Wraith was recruited by the design team on
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 fitting and calibration of the new USS REPUBLIC warp engines and
 core: a job he threw himself into. By the time Wraith was done with
-Republic he had been promoted twice in rank and in the design team he was
+REPUBLIC he had been promoted twice in rank and in the design team he was
 now second in overall charge of the REPUBLIC build.  So far
 simulations had showed that REPUBLIC was so tight that she was
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 IV. Official Star Fleet Record
 =============================
 .215 Entered Starfleet Academy year 1.
 .216 Entered Starfleet Academy year 2.
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 	 working on the latest Constitution class vessel REPUBLIC.
 .217 Assigned Chief Engineer USS REPUBLIC.
+.363 Reassigned Chief Engineer USS CONSTELLATION.
 A. Promotion History
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 .254 Promoted Lt.Jg.
 .174 Promoted Lt.
 B. Service History
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 USS CHEROKEE asst Chief Engineer
 STARBASE 6 assigned to design team USS REPUBLIC
------------------------------------------------------------
+USS REPUBLIC Chief Engineer
+USS CONSTELLATION Chief Engineer
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 Daystrom Medal
 Cochrane Warp Theorem Award
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 Others skills Wraith has are in hand to hand fighting and survival
 techniques. Many were learned in seclusion in the Lupin colony.
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 Mr Storm appears to be in a reasonable state of health and fitness.
-His body had shown a lot of old scars and of badly set bones that it
+Exam reveals sevearl of old scars. History indicates several badly set
-has been necessary to operate on to insure he will grow old
+bones from his orphan days surgically reset.
-comfortably.
 -- Dr. Martin Baker
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 When performing a report on Mr Storm it is important that his past is
 mentioned. Having been on his own for so many years has undoubtably
-shaped and hardened the man we see today. I notice immediately the Mr
+shaped and hardened the man we see today. I notice immediately the Mr.
-Storm does not enjoy large crowds, he does not engage in idle banter
+Storm does not enjoy large crowds, nor does he engage in idle banter
 or small talk. If he wants some thing he asks for it, if he requires
 nothing then you will get nothing but silence as he goes about his
 business.
-We know that has a great affinity with the engineering lifestyle he
+We know that he has a great affinity for the engineering lifestyle he
-has chosen for himself, Almost to a point of insubordination. As his
+has chosen for himself, almost to a point of insubordination. As his
 records show he does not like his work to be tampered with and will
-act in defence if he feels threatened or undermimed.
+act defensively if he feels threatened or undermined.
-I know Mr Storm to be in a longterm relationship, but I think as for
+I know Mr Storm to be in a long-term long-distance relationship, but I
-close friends he could probably count them on one hand.  He comes
+think as for close friends he could probably count them on one hand.
-across as a very distant character, someone who enjoys his own company
+He comes across as a very distant character, someone who enjoys his
-rather than being social with others.
+own company rather than being social with others.
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-Anything mechanical. Reading.
+Anything mechanical.
+Reading.
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