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<center><font size="+2" color="#868cde">STAR FLEET: ORIGINS Concept and Outline</font></center>
 
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<center><font size="+2" color="#868cde">ASR: ORIGINS Proposal</font></center>
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==INTRODUCTION==
==INTRODUCTION==


Everything had changed.  A doorway has opened.
Everything had changed.  A doorway has opened.


The ships are legendary: ENTERPRISE...YORKTOWN...LEXINGTON...CONSTELLATION...FARRAGUT...
The ships are legendary: ''Enterprise''...''Yorktown''...''Lexington''...''Constellation''...''Farragut''...


The names are heroic: Pike...Kirk...Decker...Tracey...Garrovik...
The names are heroic: Pike...Kirk...Decker...Tracey...Garrovik...
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A new beginning has arrived. Join us.
A new beginning has arrived. Join us.
 
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==GENERAL INFORMATION==
==GENERAL INFORMATION==


This is a proposal to begin a new ASR-offshoot PBeM group, called "ASR: Origins."  "Origins" will be a writing group specifically designed to explore the alternate timeline opened up in the latest Star Trek movie by J.J. Abrams.  That movie will serve as the main inspiration for "Origins."  As an alternate timeline, "Origins" will not have a direct impact on the stories, plotlines or technologies developed in and for ASR.
This is an outline for a new ASR-offshoot PBeM group, called "STAR FLEET: Origins."  "Origins" will be a writing group specifically designed to explore the alternate timeline opened up in the latest ''Star Trek'' movie by J.J. Abrams.  That movie will serve as the main inspiration for "Origins."  As an alternate timeline, "Origins" will not have a direct impact on the stories, plotlines or technologies developed in and for [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]].
 
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==BACKGROUND==
==BACKGROUND==


The setting of "Origins" will be around 2260, just after the events of Star Trek (that movie took place in 2258), around 160 years BEFORE the current ASR timeline.
The setting of "Origins" will be around 2260, just after the events of Star Trek (that movie took place in 2258), around 160 years BEFORE the current [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]] timeline.


This setting is important, as it will affect everything about the club: the technologies available, the storylines open to development, the writing style, etc.
This setting is important, as it will affect everything about the club: the technologies available, the storylines open to development, the writing style, etc.
 
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===The Federation and the Geopolitical Situation===
===The Federation and the Geopolitical Situation===
The Federation of 2260 is a much different than the Federation of 2421.  This is a smaller Federation, much more closely centered around the core systems of Earth, Andor and Tellar.  It is a Federation where Vulcan has been destroyed and the Vulcan race nearly eradicated, its 10,000 survivors now endangered species on
The Federation of 2260 is a much different than the Federation of 2421.  This is a smaller Federation, much more closely centered around the core systems of Earth, Andor and Tellar.  It is a Federation where Vulcan has been destroyed and the Vulcan race nearly eradicated, its 10,000 survivors now endangered species on
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The Klingons are aggressive, and they do not like us.  We're in their way.  And they don't miss an opportunity to remind us of this.  Of course, they still have to rebuild their fleet after Nero's decimation of it in 2258.
The Klingons are aggressive, and they do not like us.  We're in their way.  And they don't miss an opportunity to remind us of this.  Of course, they still have to rebuild their fleet after Nero's decimation of it in 2258.


The memories of the Federation-Romulan War are far closer to the surface, the scars far more recent.  However, despite Nero's timeline-altering appearance, the Romulans have closed their borders and have kept to themselves for many years.  Will they that way?  We USED to know...but not any more.  Is this a golden opportunity, or a precursor to war?  And if it is war they want, then with whom?  The Klingons are vulnerable as well...
The memories of the Federation-Romulan War are far closer to the surface, the scars far more recent.  However, despite Nero's timeline-altering appearance, the Romulans have closed their borders and have kept to themselves for many years.  Will they stay that way?  We USED to know...but not any more.  Is this a golden opportunity, or a precursor to war?  And if it is war they want, then with whom?  The Klingons are vulnerable as well...


The Federation is still young, still growing.  By 2421, Starfleet patrolled a huge expanse, requiring hundreds, even thousands, of ships just to protect and aid its member worlds.  However, in 2260, the Federation was a nascent one- growing, searching out new races and species to become members in friendship and mutual benefit.  It was less a military organization than a diplomatic or scientific group...though Nero's incursions have given voice to the more "hawkish" elements of Starfleet in recent years...
The Federation is still young, still growing.  By 2421, Starfleet patrolled a huge expanse, requiring hundreds, even thousands, of ships just to protect and aid its member worlds.  However, in 2260, the Federation was a nascent one- growing, searching out new races and species to become members in friendship and mutual benefit.  It was less a military organization than a diplomatic or scientific group...though Nero's incursions have given voice to the more "hawkish" elements of Starfleet in recent years...
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===Starships===
This was the era of the great [[Constitution-AT statistics | CONSTITUTION-class cruiser]]- generally referred to simply as a "starship" in deference to its role as a "star-jumper," moving from system to system in peaceful exploration.  It was the most modern ship of its time, and reflected the priorities of early Starfleet: she was equipped with expansive science and medical labs, with staffs to match.  Its crew compliment of 1100 souls was nearly triple that of any other ship.


====Starships====
These ships also carried powerful- for their time- weapons and defensive systems: phasers, photon torpedoes, shields, even a point defense system.  They were more than capable of defending themselves and others if need be.  But despite these impressive tactical systems, the CONSTITUTION-class starships were not built around their weapons; they were ships of peaceful exploration, its crews more scientists and diplomats than soldiers.
This was the era of the great CONSTITUTION-class cruiser- generally referred to simply as a "starship" in deference to its role as a "star-jumper," moving from system to system in peaceful exploration.  It was the most modern ship of its time, and reflected the priorities of early Starfleet: she was equipped with expansive science and medical labs, with staffs to match.  Its crew compliment of 1100 souls was nearly triple that of any other ship.
 
These ships also carried powerful- for their time- weapons and defensive systems: phasers, photon torpedoes, shields, even a point defense system.  They were more than capable of defending themselves and others if need be.  But despite these impressive tactical systems, the CONSTITUTION-class starships were not built around their weapons; they were ships of peaceful exploration, its crews more scientists and diplomats than soldier.


However, these magnificent ships were not cheap, and given the far more limited resources available to Starfleet, there were far fewer of these capital ships than one might expect.  From 2258-2266, only 12 of these massive ships were constructed.  Very often, they were literally "the only ship in the quadrant."
However, these magnificent ships were not cheap, and given the far more limited resources available to Starfleet, there were far fewer of these capital ships than one might expect.  From 2258-2266, only 12 of these massive ships were constructed.  Very often, they were literally "the only ship in the quadrant."


Technologically, though at the cutting edge of technology in 2260, these ships are far inferior to those of 2421.  There are no pulse phasers, phaser cannons, quantum flux torpedoes, multiphasic shields, transwarp drive, d-warp drive systems, or holodecks.  Warp 8 was considered emergency speed only; impulse drive was a simple ion-thrust drive, not the modern gravity planing drives of the ASR Prime universe.  Combat of that era was usually more "up close and personal," given the reduced ranges and capabilities of the weapons as compared with today's.
Technologically, though at the cutting edge of technology in 2260, these ships are far inferior to those of 2421.  There are no pulse phasers, phaser cannons, quantum flux torpedoes, multiphasic shields, transwarp drive, d-warp drive systems, or holodecks.  Warp 8 was considered emergency speed only; impulse drive was a simple ion-thrust drive, not the modern gravity planing drives of the [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]] universe.  Combat of that era was usually more "up close and personal," given the reduced ranges and capabilities of the weapons as compared with today's.
 
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===The Starship Captain===
===The Starship Captain===
The Captain of one of these starships enjoyed a freedom of command most modern officers do not.  As they were typically the "man on the spot" so to speak, the Captain had a wide breadth of discretion as to the course of action he could take to settle a dispute, tempt a planet to join the Federation, etc.  Starfleet Command-
The Captain of one of these starships enjoyed a freedom of command most modern officers do not.  As they were typically the "man on the spot" so to speak, the Captain had a wide breadth of discretion as to the course of action he could take to settle a dispute, tempt a planet to join the Federation, etc.  Starfleet Command-
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Truly, it was a time unlike any other in Starfleet.  It was the Age of Sail in space; it was Horatio Hornblower with warp drive.
Truly, it was a time unlike any other in Starfleet.  It was the Age of Sail in space; it was Horatio Hornblower with warp drive.
 
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==GAMEPLAY ADMINISTRATION==
==GAMEPLAY ADMINISTRATION==


Initially, it is unlikely that "Origins" will be anything but a glorified "free thread" to begin with, until numbers go up.  The initial goal is to aim for establishing and crewing two units (the efforts to find interested parties outside of ASR are taking place as of this writing), with expansion available if the
"Origins" will be set up to mirror current [http://alt-starfleet-rpg.org STAR FLEET] practices: a "fleet commander" (Commander, ORIGINS or "COMORIGINS") overseeing the individual starship "units".  There will be no level of administration between the "fleet commander" and the units themselves; not only is this not necessary at this early stage of Origin's development, it also helps reflect the "freedom" of the Starship Captain of this era: with no fleet bounaries to worry about or specific established villains to focus on or stay away from, storyline development is considerably more open and freer than in [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]].
interest is there. Two units does not make for a fleet, however, and as such do not require additional senior administrative support than is already in place. Until such a time when and if 3-4 of these "Origins" units are active, the senior unit CO can act as the liaison ("The Commodore") with the Flag Council and the CSFO.  This CO would have no formal entry into the FC; only when sufficient "Origins" unit numbers are met would this position be on the fleet commander level.
 
Eventually, it is hoped that the administrative set-up of "Origins" would roughly mirror current ASR administrative practices in that there would be a "fleet commander" overseeing the individual starship "units".  There will be no level of administration between the "fleet commander" and the units themselves; not only is this not necessary at this early stage of Origin's development, it also helps reflect  
the "freedom" of the Starship Captain of this era: with no fleet bounaries to worry about or specific established villains to focus on or stay away from, storyline development is considerably more open and freer than in "Classic" ASR.


This freedom, while greater, is not completely without boundaries: exploration missions and missions of "local flavor" (answer a local distress call, answering a petition of a local govenrment, etc.) are encouraged, with confrontations between Federation and Klingon or Romulan forces less frequent- this should not be a problem, since so much less of the galaxy has been explored or "spoken for."  "To seek out new life and new civilizations" will be the motto of Origins.
This freedom, while greater, is not completely without boundaries: exploration missions and missions of "local flavor" (answer a local distress call, answering a petition of a local govenrment, etc.) are encouraged, with confrontations between Federation and Klingon or Romulan forces less frequent- this should not be a problem, since so much less of the galaxy has been explored or "spoken for."  "To seek out new life and new civilizations" will be the motto of Origins.
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The end goal of this would be to develop and maintain the off-the-cuff, renegade "flavor" of the era and allow this to come through in the writing.
The end goal of this would be to develop and maintain the off-the-cuff, renegade "flavor" of the era and allow this to come through in the writing.
 
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==GAMEPLAY MECHANICS==
==GAMEPLAY MECHANICS==


This will be a PBeM group, just as ASR is.  Posts will be submitted to a central post archive on Yahoo (we can use ASR's if it is desired for advertising reasons- we can always tag the posts [ORIGINS] to differentiate them from "normal" ASR posts) as well as a unit archive.  Unit archives will be open for public viewing, the posts capped at PG-13.  Again, all this mirrors typical PBeM practice.
This will be a PBeM group, just as [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]] is.  Posts will be submitted to a central post archive on Yahoo (we can use Prime's if it is desired for advertising reasons- we can always tag the posts [ORIGINS] to differentiate them from "normal" PRIME posts) as well as a unit archive.  Unit archives will be open for public viewing, the posts capped at PG-13.  Again, all this mirrors typical PBeM practice.
 
The group would also need to maintain a web presence separate (though, again, it could be linked or even a subdomain of ASR if it is desired) from ASR, since units, technologies and universe backgrounds would be markedly different.  This site can either be a wiki portal within ASR's wiki, or something completely separate.  My suggestion would be for a "origins.alt-starfleet-rpg.org" subdomain, or something along those
lines.
 
One additional note: with the possibility of so many new players joining "Origins," some consideration must be given to training these raw players to ASR's format and get them used to writing in a shared fiction environment.  My initial thoughts on this is that each new unit, as it comes online, completes a short "mini-mission" of about a month or so in real-time length, designed to give the players the chance to learn HOW
to write for ASR and HOW to write off of each other.  Think of it as bing akin to the old ALB holodeck training, except it will be live (i.e. not in a holodeck since they were not around in 2260) and perhaps expanded beyond 4 players.  The individual unit CO's would be tasked with developing the mini-mission and making sure the players are not just writing, but given appropriate constructive criticism when needed.
 
 
==ISSUES==
 
* Can a player command a unit in both ASR Prime and ASR: ORIGINS?
** Simply, no.  There are reasons why players are NOT allowed to command more than one unit in ASR:
**: Because of the time demands commanding a unit makes on the CO;
**: Because if a player were to command more than one unit, he would have more than one seat at the bi-annual Round Table, giving that player a stronger "voice" than the rest of the CO's.
 


* Can a player hold characters in both ASR Prime and ASR: ORIGINS?
The group would also need to maintain a web presence separate from [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]], since units, technologies and universe backgrounds would be markedly different.  This site will consist of a sudomain of its own (<<http://origins.alt-starfleet-rpg.org>>) with a portal page pointing towards various parts of the STAR FLEET Wiki.  The wiki, in turn, will have a separate "hub" of "Origins"-related documents, all categorized with the tag "STAR FLEET: ORIGINS" for ease of searching.  The "Origins" wiki will also have its own distinct header menu- again, for ease of searching.
** Yes, of courseThat is at each individual player's discretion.  While we suggest that a player not have more than three geenral characters in all of ASR, as long as a player shows he/she is able to handle the load, he/she is welcome to write in whichever unverse they prefer, or both at the same time.
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==TRAINING==
Training for new players in "Origins" will be a form of on-the-job training: the new player will be under the direction of our special Training Officer (played by [mailto:Tess691@aol.com Mary McNeely]) for his/her first few posts to his/her unit.  The Training Officer is there to give suggestions and direction as to the proper formatting and style of STAR FLEET posts.  Once the Training Officer feels as though the new player has grasped the basics of this, direction shifts to things such as dropping hooks and picking them up.  This process should take anywhere between 3-5 game posts from the new player.  Once the new player has those ideas down, the Training Officer informs the Captain and steps back, leaving the player to his/her own devices under the Captain's supervision- like all other writers.
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==FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS==
* '''Can a player command a unit in both [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]] and [[STAR FLEET: ORIGINS | Star Fleet: ORIGINS]]?'''
*: Simply, noThere are reasons why players are NOT allowed to command more than one unit in STAR FLEET:
*::* Because of the time demands commanding a unit makes on the CO;
*::* Because if a player were to command more than one unit, he would have more than one seat at the bi-annual Round Table, giving that player a stronger "voice" than the rest of the CO's.




* '''Can a player hold characters in both [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]] and [[STAR FLEET: ORIGINS | Star Fleet: ORIGINS]]?'''
*: Yes, of course.  That is at each individual player's discretion.  While we suggest that a player not have more than three characters in all of STAR FLEET, as long as a player shows he/she is able to handle the load, he/she is welcome to write in whichever unverse they prefer, or both at the same time.
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==PLAYER REQUIREMENTS==
==PLAYER REQUIREMENTS==
 
Thre are only really 2 things [[STAR FLEET: ORIGINS | Star Fleet: ORIGINS]] requires of its players:
* Thre are only really 2 things ORIGNIS requires of its players:
* '''''a willingness to be ACTIVE.'''''  We abide by a slightly different posting policy than [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | PRIME]], as we prefer more frequent-but-shorter posts in order to maintain proper momentum and interest.  Therefore, before joining, we ask that all potential players make sure they can post somewhere in the weekly area.  Understand that these posts can be shorter- a page or so, even a couple of paragraphs is perfectly acceptable- than what is common in [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]].
 
* '''''a willingness to remain IN CONTACT.'''''  In [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: Prime]], it is considered "common courtesy" to inform one's CO of a impending absence of more than a couple of days; it is also considered proper to respond to any mails sent to you by a player or "superior officer" within 48-72 hours.  In [[STAR FLEET: ORIGINS | ORIGINS]], these "common courtesies" will be followed as well for everyone's benefit.
*: ''a willingness to be ACTIVE.''  We abide by a slightly different posting policy than ASR, as we prefer more frequent-but-shorter posts in order to maintain proper momentum and interest.  Therefore, before joining, we ask that all potential players make sure they can post somewhere in the weekly area.  Understand that these posts can be shorter- a page or so, even a couple of paragraphs is perfectly acceptable- than what is common in ASR Prime.
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*: ''a willingness to remain in contact.''  In ASR Prime, it is considered "common courtesy" to inform one's CO of a impending absence of more than a couple of days; it is also considered proper to respond to any mails sent to you by a player or "superior officer" within 48-72 hours.  In ORIGINS, these "common courtesies" will be followed as well for everyone's benefit.
 
 
==FINAL THOUGHTS==
==FINAL THOUGHTS==
The goal here is to blend the idealism and the "frontier" mentality of ''The Original Series'' with the gritty, industrial, more militaristic feel of the latest ''Star Trek'' movie.  That's the idea, anyway.


The goal here is to blend the idealism and the "frontier" mentality of ''The Original Series'' with the gritty, industrial, mor emilitaristic feel of the latest ''Star Trek'' movie.  That's the idea, anyway.
We also want to work hard to keep a higher level of activity than we've seen in [[STAR FLEET: PRIME | Star Fleet: PRIME]] in recent years- thus the policy of "shorter-but-more-frequent posting."
 
We also want to work hard to keep a higher level of activity than we've seen in ASR Prime in recent years.  Hopefully, our policy of "shorter-but-more-frequent posts" will pay off in this area.
 


Welcome to a new beginning.
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Respectfully,
Respectfully,


-- [mailto:scottjlusby@hargray.com Scott Lusby] <br>
-- [mailto:comorigins@alt-starfleet-rpg.org Scott Lusby] <br>
/\ [[ORIGINS:_Joseph_Carstairs | VADM Joseph Carstairs]] <br>
/\ [[ORIGINS:_Joseph_Carstairs | VADM Joseph Carstairs]] <br>
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