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 Bruce "Lucky" Paulson was born on July 13th, 2013.  He was assigned to the
 USS KELVIN on the ship's thirteenth sortie which saw her destruction at the hand
-of the renegade Nero.  His quick actions helped save 13 crewmen aboard his
+of the renegade Nero in his 13th month of duty aboard ship.
-shuttle (number 13) which was damaged while escaping Nero's attack.  He was
+His quick actions helped save 13 crewmen aboard his
-married October 13th.  His twin son and daughter were born November 13th at
+shuttle (number 13) which was damaged while escaping Nero's attack.
-one 1300 hrs local time.  He later graduated 13th in his class at Starfleet Academy.
+Bruce was married October 13th.  His twin son and daughter were born
+November 13th at one 1300 hrs local time.  He later graduated 13th in his class
+at Starfleet Academy.
 He was assigned to the USS ODYSSEY and ended up being one of only 13 survivors
 from the armada destroyed over Vulcan in Nero's attack of 2258.  The