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 Bruce "Lucky" Paulson was born on July 13th, 2013.  He was assigned to the
 USS KELVIN on the ship's thirteenth sortie which saw her destruction at the hand
-of the renegade Nero in his 13th month of duty aboard ship.
+of the renegade Nero in his 13th month of duty aboard ship.  His quick actions
-His quick actions helped save 13 crewmen aboard his
+helped save his shuttle (number 13) which was damaged while escaping Nero's
-shuttle (number 13) which was damaged while escaping Nero's attack.
+attack.
-Bruce was married October 13th.  His twin son and daughter were born
+He graduated 13th in his class at Starfleet Academy.
-November 13th at 1300 hrs local time.  He graduated 13th in his class
-at Starfleet Academy.
 He was assigned to the USS ODYSSEY and ended up being one of only 13 survivors
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 USS REPUBLIC, NCC-1371 (note the 13 in the registry).
-At around five decades old, Bruce "Lucky" Paulson has already had a distinguished
+At around five decades old, Bruce "Lucky" Paulson has already had a
-career in Starfleet.
+distinguished career in Starfleet.