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 idea of right and wrong.
-As a woman the Christian faith, she has learned to keep her sharp temper
+As a woman of the Christian faith, she has learned to keep her sharp temper
-reigned in.  She nevertheless still deals with feelings of deep hurt and
+reigned in.  She nevertheless still deals with feelings of profound hurt and
-anger over her adulterous ex-husband.  Consequently, Claire is a woman
+anger over her adulterous ex-husband.  Consequently, Claire has trust
-with trust issues when it comes to interpersonal relationships.  Her
+issues.  Her tendency to distance herself emotionally from those who love
-tendency to distance herself emotionally from those who love her has
+her has shown through in practically all her relationships.  Of her immediate
-shown through in practically all her relationships.  Of her immediate family,
+family, she has only remained close to Serah and even in that bond, cracks
-she has only remained close to Serah and even in that bond, cracks have
+have begun to show.
-begun to show.
 Claire commands an uncanny instinct for when trouble is brewing.  She