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 I.    PERSONAL STATISTICS
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-* FULL NAME: C'Rala
+* FULL NAME: C'Rala Eerro Mrierr'Shrambarr
+* GIVEN NAME: C'Rala
 *    CURRENT RANK: CDR (O-5)
 *    CURRENT BILLET: CO
-*    SPECIES (EXTRACTION): Caitian (Cait/Ferasa, Mountain phenotype)
+*    SPECIES (EXTRACTION): Caitian (Cait/N'Rrrap, Mountain phenotype)
 *    GENDER/SEX: Female
 *    AGE: 36
 *    DOB: SD 239502123
-*    POB: Shrambarr, Ferasa, Caitian System( 15 Lyra)
+*    POB: Shrambarr, N'Rrrap, Caitian System (15 Lyra IV)
 *    PARENTS: M'Grerow (father), C'Raarra (mother)
 *    SIBLINGS: K'Nill, Sr'asha, S'Nisarr, P'Ria (nrothers), P'Teia, Sr'iri, S'Tora, Mr'iras, Priarr (sisters)
 *    CLAN: Mrierr (about 475 members, roughly 37 families)
-*    SPOUSE:    none
+*    SPOUSE:   none
 *    CHILDREN: none
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-Her sensibilities pushed her to study Music and Art History, not just Caitinan, but from the Federation at large. She is quite proficient in playing several recorder-type instruments from several cultures. She is also an excellent dancer and it's actually one of her favourite hobbies.
+Her sensibilities pushed her to study Music and Art History, not just Caitian, but from the Federation at large. She is quite proficient in playing several recorder-type instruments from several cultures. She is also an excellent dancer and it's actually one of her favourite hobbies.
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-It's easy to get acquainted with her, but hard to become her friend. However, once she considers you a friend, she will fiercy loyal and caring.
+It's easy to get acquainted with her, but hard to become her friend. However, once she considers you a friend, she will fiercely loyal and caring.
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 *    Star Date (24)200429: Assigned as FCO, USS ELIZABETH BLACKWELL, NCC-91147-A DD
 *    Star Date (24)221101: Promoted to LT (O-3)
-*    Star Date (24)221101: Assigned as FCO, USS Kuznetsov NCC-28224 CA
+*    Star Date (24)221101: Assigned as FCO, USS KUZNETSOV NCC-28224 CA
 *    Star Date (24)260301: Promoted to LCDR (O-4)
 *    Star Date (24)260301: Assigned as OPS, USS PROTON NCC-53079 DD
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-She also loves to swimm, and usually goes by a Holographic pool to swimm first thing in the morning, "to wake up".
+She also loves to swim, and usually goes by a Holographic pool to swim first thing in the morning, "to wake up".